FEEDBACK ON THE GATEWAY CHRISTMAS 1997 ASSIGNMENT
Most of you seem to have managed the design. If you had trouble with
it, make sure you attend the labs this term to get yourself up to
speed with the design process and with your Verilog skills.
Some of these were very well done, and some not so well done. This
section lists some common mistakes in the hope that you can learn from
the past when you come to write up your Spring assignment, which
consists of Verilog code for a design and another Electronics
Letter. Please re-read Dr Blair's web page (in the Gateway area)
on Feedback from 1996 showing common mistakes; quite a few of
the mistakes listed there were repeated in 1997.
(a) Structure
Most people structured their paper with a beginning, middle and end,
using headings like Introduction, Design and
Conclusions. Some people did better than this.
There was nothing wrong with these headings, but give some thought to
how you are going to structure the Electronics Letter for your
Spring assignment. The design is going to be larger, but you'll still
only have a short paper in which to explain it.
(b) Abstract
As in 1996, the abstract was often too short. Sometimes it was
factually incorrect (eg "This paper gives details of ..." when the
paper clearly didn't). Re-read the 1996 feedback page.
(c) Description of the design
Remember that the reader of your Electronics Letter must have
convincing evidence that you have done what you say. You must
present enough details of what you've done so that this is clear.
Also, think carefully about what you have to do to fulfil the
requirements of the assignment. The specification of the Christmas
Design Exercise clearly said :
You are expected to produce a design with the details of the
gate-level implementation down to primitive boolean gates
and a dtype (or an m-bit dtype) which, of course, will be
behavioural.
but many people did not do this.
It is not easy to explain details in a short paper, which is why you
must think carefully about it.
(d) Conclusions
Re-read the 1996 feedback page. The same mistakes were evident in
1997.
(e) References
Think what written materials you have used in doing the assignment,
and refer to them.
- References to web pages are acceptable if the pages themselves
will be meaningful to the reader
- There should be a labelled cross-reference in the text to any
reference at the end of the paper. In the case of Electronics
Letters the label is a number. If you don't put a label in, the
reader doesn't know why you've included the reference at the end.
- The references at the end should be complete. Look at the example
Dr Blair provided for you on the Gateway web pages, and at other
examples in the library, to see what's required.
(f) Diagrams
Diagrams were, in general, very good and clear. Make sure you label
them properly: some high-level diagrams didn't have labels on the
inputs and outputs to blocks, which makes it very difficult for the
reader to follow.
(g) Spelling and grammar
Re-read the 1996 feedback page. Nobody expects magnificent prose, but
watch out for the following :
- Anyone can make a mistake in their spelling, but 95% of
spelling mistakes should be easy to find with a spelling-checker.
- Anyone can make a mistake in their grammar, but a careful
re-reading your paper should make most of these mistakes obvious.
- Electronics Letters is a formal paper. The web page you are
currently reading is full of "don't"s, "isn't"s and "what's"s, but
these constructions are not appropriate for a formal paper.
Good luck with your Spring assignment.
Robin Woodburn
22 January, 1998